Script


Scene one
Fact: the war start on 28/jul/1914
Dear John Smith
My dear friend we are off to war today
Good luck my friend keep safe
Kind regards
Fard Pauls
Transition: telegram saying the war has starter
Scene two
Fact: The spanish flu killed a third of all military’s death
Dear John Smith
We have start dead for a cold or a flu.
The doctor said the flu has killed a third of everyone in the war
I am still ok how are you
Kind regards
Fard Paul
Transition:telegram saying about the Spanish flu
weapons
Scene three
Fact: The first chemical weapons was used in world war one in august/1914
Dear John Smith
The germans have start to use gases on us some of them burn and a lot kill.
John this war is bad. The boy upstir are talk about doing something to stop anyone for using the
gases angin they are talking about Geneva Protocol or something. Keep away for the gas.
Kind regards
Fard Paul
Transition:telegram saying about the chemical weapons bomb
Scene four
Fact: the pool of peace is 40ft that was created by 45 ton explosives
Dear John Smith
Hello john it my fard it has being a long time by now i am in Belgium.
Sorry for cut that letter short last time by a big explosives take place and i had to run.
They said they will call the 40ft whole the pool of peace.
Kind regards
Fard Paul
Transition:telegram saying about the pool of Peace
Scene five
Fact: the blood bank was developed in world war one
Dear John Smith
Hello John good new, doctor have start make thing called blood bank that can save a lot of life.
Kind regards
Fard Paul
Transition :telegram saying about the blood canister
lines
Scene six
Fact: dogs carried messenger and other order in world war one
Dear John Smith
John today i meeted a dog team that help get messenger and other thing around now.
Kind regards
Fard Paul
Transition: telegram saying about the dog
Scene seven
Fact: 9 million soldier and 7 million citizens died in world war one
Dear John Smith
Hello bad news today everyone is talking about the dead toll. It has add to 16 million i totol
But not all soldiers it work out to be 9 million soldiers and 7 million citizens. I have no good news just
the bad my friend just bad.
Kind regards
Fard Paul
Transition: telegram saying the end of the war
Scene eight
Fact: 12 million letter was send each week in world war one
Dear John Smith
Hello John the war has end today on 11/nov/1918. It has be four long year
In the four year 12 million letter each week.
Which makes:
576 million letter a year
48 million letter a mouth
12 million letter a week
1.7 million letter a day
28 thousand letter a hour
476 hundred letter a minter
7 letter a second
I was told this is the last to go which would make it letter 2,304,000,000 in the war.
Kind regards
Fard Paul

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